Dear Professor Brad,
I am Roy Yong a TLM1010 student, I am writing to share with you on my learning journey for this module.
The module helps me to learn about product description and analysis and write a report with the essential product’s function with comparison to other similar products or services.
There were also many factors to consider when writing a report and deciding on a marketable product with a group. Before learning from the module, I thought to write a simple report was to start with a relevant topic with an introduction on product or service, the content of body and conclusion of the product or service. But I was shocked to know that there are so many style and professional ways in writing minutes and actions required to follow up to choose a product before we could prepare a good proposal to promote or improve a product to relevant superiors or management such as proper format (table of content, abstract summary, etc.) and appropriate wording to use when explaining about the product proposal with idea, gap and goal of the situation. Another important thing I have learnt was how to properly cite a source in APA format which will be useful when I enter the workforce and tasked to submit a report to my supervisor.
The oral presentation helps me to train myself in communicating the message clearly to others despite mine usage of filler words which could be improved. Through the presentation showcase, as an audience, I have learnt that construct and pictures help to focus on the presentation better.
Prof Brad thank you for all your constructive feedback and guidance, I enjoyed the module a lot and I hope to learn from you more in the future.
Best Regards,
Roy Yong Jin Yao
I am Roy Yong a TLM1010 student, I am writing to share with you on my learning journey for this module.
The module helps me to learn about product description and analysis and write a report with the essential product’s function with comparison to other similar products or services.
There were also many factors to consider when writing a report and deciding on a marketable product with a group. Before learning from the module, I thought to write a simple report was to start with a relevant topic with an introduction on product or service, the content of body and conclusion of the product or service. But I was shocked to know that there are so many style and professional ways in writing minutes and actions required to follow up to choose a product before we could prepare a good proposal to promote or improve a product to relevant superiors or management such as proper format (table of content, abstract summary, etc.) and appropriate wording to use when explaining about the product proposal with idea, gap and goal of the situation. Another important thing I have learnt was how to properly cite a source in APA format which will be useful when I enter the workforce and tasked to submit a report to my supervisor.
The oral presentation helps me to train myself in communicating the message clearly to others despite mine usage of filler words which could be improved. Through the presentation showcase, as an audience, I have learnt that construct and pictures help to focus on the presentation better.
Prof Brad thank you for all your constructive feedback and guidance, I enjoyed the module a lot and I hope to learn from you more in the future.
Best Regards,
Roy Yong Jin Yao
Dear Roy,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this detailed reflection. You've covered many aspects of your module learning. You have discussed your experience with your project team and report writing, for example. I'm happy to learn that you valued the opportunity to do various genres of writing. You also seem to have appreciated attending the presentation showcase and learning from your peers.
Overall, you made a very good effort this term. I enjoyed working with you and discussing your many ideas and questions. All the best as you continue your learning journey!
Brad